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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 02-17-2005, 05:19 PM   #1
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Nameless

Screaming into the night
Calling out your name
Crying into the darkness
Bleeding in my plight
Breaking soul deceased
Dying mind shrieking
Deathly calls ring out
Suffocation intoxication

Intoxication deprivation
Crimes escalate unseen
Tortured souls fade away
Destroyed minds break down
Hate, Rage, Anger, Putrid
Stench of all things negative
Reeking and enticing beauty
Seducing and murdering

Anger the force of all
Hate the driving motor
Rage the unending fuel
A putrid concoction
Reeking malovence defiled
Seduction insignificant
Blood dripping, pooling
Hands covered in death.
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Old 02-17-2005, 05:28 PM   #2
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.. eh not really doin much for me it seems to lack any sort of meaning or image. i dont get it... explain?
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Old 02-17-2005, 05:33 PM   #3
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Call it a work in progress, look at it again I've added two verses, though they might not help
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Old 02-17-2005, 05:35 PM   #4
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I don't know what this is so don't ask me ... I just had something that wanted to come out and this was it ... figure it out for yourself ... just know I am disturbed and the thought kind of faded after the first stanza
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