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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
02-17-2005, 04:58 PM
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Christmas Lights in October
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02-17-2005, 05:14 PM
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Forum Hottie
Join Date: May 2004
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Holls, I love this. Wonderful insight into a woman's mind. I really enjoyed the references to months and the shoes, well I have shoes like that, lol.
This one part though I think you left something out or am I reading it wrong?
"He promised her then that three years later
she never be now."
Nae
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02-17-2005, 10:38 PM
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Fabulous holls! Hey, I've missed reading your words. Nice to see you back cause no one writes the nitty gritty like you do.
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02-18-2005, 09:58 AM
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Thanks ya'all!
Good to have some time to be back!
And Nae: There wasn't supposed to be anything there, but a few collegues of mine have commented on the same thing, so I may just make it "her now".
I look forward to browsing some of the poems in here as soon as I get this project done!!! Hopefully, by this afternoon *fingers crossed*.
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02-19-2005, 06:31 PM
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Location: Michigan
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That was amazing.....i aspire to be able to write like you someday.....I must say....i like the way you got into the mind of the woman in the poem, it was so deep
Love and Kisses,
Murdershewrote
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02-21-2005, 09:17 AM
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Murdershewrote2005:
Thanks; albeit I would not aspire to write like me. I'm sure your own sweet voice is divine 
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02-21-2005, 02:40 PM
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Holls, glad to hear from you again.
In all honesty, I did not like this poem.
However,
Do you see how people react to your words? I said it before and I'll say it again: You are truly a poet!
Still waiting for that chapbook...
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02-21-2005, 03:09 PM
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Thank you for your honesty and encouragment; and in my case, they are basically the same things.
Cheers!
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02-21-2005, 05:26 PM
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Join Date: May 2004
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hey this is pretty good... the only complaint is that I had to take a break and read more carefully cuz I missed some important images ~.^ but that's my fault, not yours.
Excellent!
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02-22-2005, 01:04 PM
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Thanks  I have been asked to do a reading this Friday and I think I am going to slide it in.
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