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Old 02-17-2005, 06:15 AM   #1
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One nation under God.
Conformity this
Conformity that
better sit down
before you get slapped.
Misdemeanor or
Felony
bleeding hearts, scream!
Li[e]berty.

So fresh, so clean
make the sheets
lie in your bed,
bed of deceits.
"I pray the Lord
my soul to take."
But...Not in school
for heavens sake.
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a bit too raggedy a read for my taste, but clever, nonetheless...
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