trpp

This journey has been long but,
no answer to be found.
Vale of tears softly,
swallowed by the ground.
Silhouetted face through a window pane.
Resurrecting memories,
perished memories slain.

Neverfate

Put the comma before the 'but' in the first line. The second line sounds a bit awkward, you may want to try rewording it. I'm not really feeling the last line 'Perished memories slain'. It's redundant and repeats the word 'memories'. Try tinkering with it tos ee if you can get something better. Still, it was a good effort. Hope I could be of some help.