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Old 02-13-2005, 07:42 PM   #1
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The Holy Moly
Cycles
There's this thing
I tend to do
It isn't great
And isn't new

It's a mad
Eternal whirl
Inescapable
Sorry world

Try as I might
To stop the flow
On it goes
As I grow

It's coming round
Now I fear
To briefly end
My time here

On I'll go
Quite helplessly
Taking part
In some activity

I really hope
This can endure
I thought that verse
Was the cure

Only time
Will tell the tale
Can I break
This cycle hell?
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Old 02-13-2005, 08:18 PM   #2
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LOL!! I like this. It made me laugh because it is along the lines of what I've been feeling the last few days.
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Old 02-14-2005, 05:06 AM   #3
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Not bad. As the esteemed poet above me pointed out, it is a tad vague. Nonetheless, great tone to it, and mostly an effective rythm. Cute read.
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Old 02-14-2005, 07:16 PM   #4
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Thank you Gehanna, J Luis and Pawn. You are all very nice.

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