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Old 02-11-2005, 11:45 PM   #1
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Valentine
Another minute passed
One more day gone
Year by year
We live on
Life's too fast
Though not today
Its different
In a way
Embracing the moment
Strengthening friendships
Giving this love
In a heart to heart
A dream's
Come true
Sharing this one
Valentine
With you.
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