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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 02-07-2005, 10:51 AM   #1
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new snuff

Well I never thought of a title and I freestyled this whole poem

I have riden on the dark horse
seen the other side of remorse
some of the things I saw made my voice hoarse
My heart has never felt that way
my feet went numb and my body began to sway
I was in the middle of my friend and enemy should I stay
All these feelings I felt, visions I saw were inside of me
My friend is my enemy they are actually pulling only one string
the string connected to my worldly self and my spiritual side
what was pulling me was sin
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Old 02-07-2005, 12:35 PM   #2
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Re: new snuff

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Well I never thought of a title and I freestyled this whole poem

I have riden on the dark horse
seen the other side of remorse
some of the things I saw made my voice hoarse
My heart has never felt that way
my feet went numb and my body began to sway
I was in the middle of my friend and enemy should I stay
All these feelings I felt, visions I saw were inside of me
My friend is my enemy they are actually pulling only one string
the string connected to my worldly self and my spiritual side
what was pulling me was sin
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