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Old 01-31-2005, 08:48 PM   #1
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Cubix of Hellfire

Going along
My lazy sugar knee
Was eating babies,
My cougar said 'Damn it damn it!'
And was eating babies,
King Kong is GAY!
My aching kangaroo kabob
Wants no depot
But likes N-Mart
For mother's bong
because my knee works for Enerong.


Cool chocolate
and grandpa's knee lack
some aching urine
and Hindu daffodils
for a long man with a six pack
who's menopause is coffee hot
But the Marlboro man is mad
because King Kong is pregnant
and how did he do that anyway?

(Basket case
hides a new lemon
for aching pumas,
and long husky pina coladas say
"this cat no more brings mail?"
Santa answers to them negligently
"The kitty is not a marsupial!
What's this about Hindu?")

The Milk Man is a negro
with nine siblings
and a kite that had daffodils
on its front-andback side
and sandals for no more foot aching
and that's what matters.
Walrus none,
Walrus has pootie tang
and mango bango hygiene

(Hindu nails are bad at breathing
and so is silly putty
that you see on TV!)
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Old 02-01-2005, 03:14 PM   #2
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haha. no one replied to this, so im gonna bump it up just for the hell of it.


this actually isnt just a piece of garbage. well it is, but allow me to explain.

i was trying to translate a poem from fillipino (if thats even spelled right). it was a challenge. this is my interpretation.
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Old 02-01-2005, 08:14 PM   #3
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crazy bananas!

*bump*
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Old 02-02-2005, 08:57 AM   #4
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... haha... what?? i was intrigued by the pop-culture references... i liked taht the marlbro man and king kong were gay lovers... that was special... but what tha f?
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