Such and So - Writers Forum

Rkay · 01-27-2005, 05:08 PM

This is a little spontaneous write that resulted from or was part of trading tags and posts just the other week. Oh to be silly and confusing.....

Such and So

You are SO
and So shall we all be
so wonderfully SO

Such that you are
as we are such
such as it is

so much so, that
suchness such
as can be So.

statue · 01-27-2005, 06:51 PM

Spontaneity created the universe, so it can only be a good thing, eh?

I thought it was nice, a little too soft for my admirable liking, but "s" sounds are always so smooth and soft, so you start and just can't stop!

It's good.

Rkay · 01-27-2005, 07:13 PM

That was exactly 'the feel' SSSSSSSSSSSStatue!
It doesn't pack a particular punch....
Thanks for reading it anyways.... and responding....

btw, still waiting to read some of your poems man....
Do oblige,
Rkay

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Originally Posted by statue

Spontaneity created the universe, so it can only be a good thing, eh?

I thought it was nice, a little too soft for my admirable liking, but "s" sounds are always so smooth and soft, so you start and just can't stop!

It's good.

statue · 01-27-2005, 07:56 PM

Ha yah maybe, I'm working on something now actually, probably post it. Again I'm a little different in my poems plus Ithink I'm changing my name, I don't think statue is me.

Rkay · 01-27-2005, 08:13 PM

Can't hardly wait!
And yeah, uhm... statue is so fix-Ed, so immobile.... monolithic? static, unmoving, mute, gathering bird poo..... hahahaha... need I go on?

You are spot on there, definitely not you!

Inform us of the changes when and if they do occur....

Rkay

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Originally Posted by statue

Ha yah maybe, I'm working on something now actually, probably post it. Again I'm a little different in my poems plus I think I'm changing my name, I don't think statue is me.