k3ng

Good morning! Hello! Whatever else said!
It's a nice day, are you out of bed?
Or is coffee swirling inside your head?
With butter and jam all over your bread.

Wherever you are, whatever the hour,
Make sure you do remember to shower!
And be very fresh like a morning flower,
So you won't walk out looking sour.

But what about those who are sleeping away?
Under sheets on pillows and snoring, they lay
Its doesnt sound right, 'Good morning!' to say
When they have already passed the day.

So I'll just say Hi to everyone here,
Whether sleeping, eating or having a beer,
I know this whole thing sounds rather queer,
It's not my fault, my thinking's not clear.

( this is hillarious. Written on the spot without thinking. Enjoy. )

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LoneWolf

Hilarious, but you have a good point about the right to say Good Morning when some people are still sleeping. My favorite part was:

So I'll just say Hi to everyone here,
Whether sleeping, eating or having a beer,
I know this whole thing sounds rather queer,
It's not my fault, my thinking's not clear.


lol In the words of Adam Sandler in Mr. Deeds I say, "...I present a bonjour to you!"

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Ilan Bouchard

Quite fun.

Not so sure about the queer line though, it was a cheap shot if you ask me.

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