nae411

Lay feathers at your bedside
Giggling as I pretend
they fell there by chance.
Blow softly into them and
watch as they fall down,
slowly covering every inch of you.
Hmm,
not the image I wanted.
Clouds of them
trace your body,
covering all I want to see,
So I take deep breath in
and
again release.
I watch as they tumble gently to your side,
exposing your skin,
once more my eyes are free to roam
to take you in.
You,
Me,
Feathers,
the possibilities are endless.
Be creative,
we have lots of pillows…

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statue

You just posted this! I snuck in for the first glance!

Soft, that's what I felt after reading it. A good gentle poem that makes you feel good inside. Feather pillows aren't as common as they used to be, and it has a nice association with older gentler days.

nae411

Hi there Statue,

Thank you for taking the sneek preview, lol. I just wrote it, just being silly wanting other things right now instead of work, yikes!

Nae

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snapshot

Damn you did it to me again. Can feel those feathers. Very well dome as usual.

nae411

Thank you Katherine. Welcome to the forums!!! Yeah so happy to see you guys here!!!! I have you at my playground I am going to throw a party!!!

Snapshot same goes to you! Yippee!!! Now what on earth did I do to you again????? LOL

Nae

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peterpaulino

Katherine and Snapshot! Nae is a well of passion and sensuality. She won't ever run out of POSSIBILITIES Lol!

I loved this Renae, 'giggle' is what I do best, and what I like best in someone.

Luv yah, Peter

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Philo

Playing in bed, man if the kids only knew.

Nae this was fun and playful and impish. Fun to read.

nae411

Oh Peter, I like that " a well of sensuality" would be a great poem. Hmm, care to collab with me?

Philo,
My kids would certainly not be surprised they say I am 36 going on 13. Thanks for reading.

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Penelope

Nae - I think you and Peter would blend beautifully together. You both have a soft edge to your words. As usual, the poem didn't do it for me, but I'm very glad for you!

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nae411

As usual the poem didn't do for you? Hmm, don't know quite how to take that, lol. Thanks, Pen. I think. ;0)

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Scratches

I hate commenting on this type of thing since I'm small and the far opposite of wise. Nevertheless this poem was wonderful, so... breezy! Very much "Easy Like Sunday Morning" in my mind.

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Never get so attached to a poem
you forget truth that lacks lyricism
and never draw so close to the heat
that you forget that you must eat
- En Gallop, Joanna Newsom

ms. vodka

Nae, this is so you. I don't think anyone could quite do feathers such gorgeous justice. Your poetry continues to be rich in style and beauty. I think to live in a world with words so gorgeus as yours is quite a nice things indeed!

Ms. V

nae411

Scratches, thank you. You are very wise for your age, I appreciate everything you write.


Miss Vodka, Thank you. That has to be one of the nicest comments I have ever received.

Nae

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Lilia

Oh, Nae? I don't think anyone has the wrong impression at all....I think people love your style and the warm erotic playful nature of your writing. This is good. I like the lighthearted playfullness a lot. Great imagery.

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Lilia

"Well Behaved Women Seldom Make History"

nae411

Why thank you, my dearest Lilia . Playful, erotic, mmm, all words I truly love!!!!

Nae

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