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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 01-21-2005, 12:41 PM   #1
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Sweet, Sweet Girl

**Yeah, more of the ambient love stuff, i suppose**

Sweet, Sweet Girl

Sweet, sweet girl
I once knew--
I thought our incontinent Love
Was strung tight and true

But sweet, sweet girl
That I once knew
Turned so very, very much
An incongruous prue

She pulled and pushed
My waning heart
Into a vindictive vise
Of which
I could not part

Her velvet kiss and
Lambent smile
Her celebrated flesh
And illustrious core
Became not mine
Once more

Oh! Sweet, sweet Cathleen
I pine and die
And of my death
You did not cry
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Old 01-21-2005, 04:28 PM   #2
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great poem

sometimes it is nice to hear about the ambient love stuff...
Your poem was well written. It was a simple but great poem with lots of meaning, and that is what is nice about
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