Getting Back The Faith (Rated R) - Writers Forum

Jp · 01-21-2005, 09:45 AM

Getting Back The Faith (Rated G)

Listen up, I've been sleeping in the devils bed
thinking I'm tough, but am I already dead.

Listen up, she's been preaching to the choir
thinking I'm fucked, If I don't buy her bible.

Listen up, His teaching tell of a second revival
thinking we're stuck, so I'm awaiting his arrival

**Penelope** · 01-21-2005, 09:55 AM

Reminded me of Brother Love's traveling Salvation Show - pack up the ladies and grab your babies and everyone knows - Brother Love shows. heh heh heh

Londongrey · 01-21-2005, 10:02 AM

Hey jp,

Good free flow, that's what it sounded like to me when I said it out loud. In the last line is that supposed to be 'we're' instead of 'were'?

Alex

Jp · 01-21-2005, 10:04 AM

yes it is, I will fix it pronto. Yes it was a free flow I said it out loud to my self while smoking a cig.