Penelope

tropical bluster
snow melts under the pressure
slides down ridges

PFA
20/01/05

__________________
"Trees cause more pollution than automobiles do." Ronald Reagan ~ 1981

Poetry Editor @ Sacred Twilight

Rkay

WOW Pen,
this poem invokes powerful and frightening images.
I've never been and hope I will never be in an avalanche.
Nature sure has it's force that cannot be toyed with.
Rkay

__________________
Poets never die_____________________________________

huni

Good one Pen, blast those hot winds, melting me this week. I sure this is crazy, but I also got an impression of a blustery but loveable person melting the icy stance of a cranky one. huni.

__________________
each time we see the face ...it is our own ideas of him which we recognize. Proust

Londongrey

Pen,

You did exactly the right thing!! Stating simply a catastrophic event, giving it weight without being wordy.

Loved it!

Alex xx

__________________
You are only as dull as the light in the room you occupy, everything else is just hearsay - Me, about five minutes ago.

Penelope

This is a true haiku based on the wet wet wet weather we're having right now. Avalanches inland and mudslides on the soppy coast. Thanks for the insight!

__________________
"Trees cause more pollution than automobiles do." Ronald Reagan ~ 1981

Poetry Editor @ Sacred Twilight