Postmodernlove

**I guess I was a little mad when I composed this..?**



Remembrance

Ignited among sorrowful recounting
Of memories lost, regained, and mounting
A remembrance of sorrowful joy
As you and I did employ
Encounters on snowy secret spots
Tiny, tiny, though, became our plots

On that lily white day in
Plain view of all to see him
You cried no more for our joys
Only sorrow did you have me employ
You took the best, the worst--my soul away
Only to move on to another kindling day
Leaving me breathless
Sad and silenced
And only morbid, deadly carrion did
I recompense

You to live on, without me?
A most horrific jest!
On that lily white day of merriment and plea
Did I take your bloody life--right from your chest

Novicewriter

What can I say? That was, well VERY good..!!! I don't quite understand poetry, but that particular one just did something for me...not sure what it is...but it did the job.

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Postmodernlove

thanks. Yeah, i liked the words I was able to use.

flowersprite

Yes it was very good...I loved it.