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Old 01-20-2005, 10:14 PM   #1
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Damn It

Goddamn this always happens
I’m sitting here
Silent as can be
All I think of is shit you see

Horrific thoughts run through my head
Hate my mother
Hate my father
There full of it and I don’t listen

I know, I know, it’s the standard
All young people come off like that
Well ya know what I say, fuck that
My parents are unlike all

My parents are so messed up I can’t describe it
We get in fights and I just can’t survive
I hate so much I shrivel into nothing
Pondering what is the best thing to say…and then its over

Because, you see my parents they are not interested
To them I’m an inferior and nothing more that shit
I’m so young yet I have fallen to a drink
One time I might have smoked a little too much dank

These people that I’m suppose to listen to are hypocrites
Hypocrisy is the one thing I cannot stand
If you are going to say one thing and do another
Why waste you breath in the first place…dumb ass

This damn poem sure blew off some steam
Now they are calling, and are just asking for a fight
I’m not perfect and sometime I can be mean
Well fuck it, cause that is what I deal with
And it’s a shit load better than some other people
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Old 01-21-2005, 08:41 AM   #2
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Old 01-21-2005, 10:08 AM   #3
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Whew,

You really did let off a lot of steam!!

Like Pen says the real life lessons come later, everyone who helps others can be called a hypocrite, but what you have to decide is do you want to become one yourself in later life? Are you going to have children? What will you say to them?

Never become a self-fulfilling prophecy, never build your own ivory tower to look down from. Never think that although people may not be able to walk the talk the talk doesn't matter, because it does.

Best wishes

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Old 01-21-2005, 04:17 PM   #4
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Thanks so much

Thanks so much guys. I will surely take into count what you said. I guess you right that life will get worse if you let it. But it is the little things lik writing a little poem here and there to get you through it.
Joe
again, appreciate your comments.
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