The Zebra


The zebra is a mighty steed
With racing stripes of black & white.
A large and handsome horse, indeed;
The zebra is a mighty steed.
The cheetah's dazed and loses speed
As op-art zebra takes to flight.
The zebra is a mighty steed
With racing stripes of black and white.

MisterSpider

I have no idea what constitutes a triolet, but I'm guessing you did it right. And who cares if you didn't? This was an entertaining read and made me smile.

Great job.

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Penelope

This is spot on for a triolet. It also has the whimsy too which made it very engaging.

MisterSpider - GG is going through poetry style exploration like I do. I use this site - http://www.internetpoetsociety.tk/ for most of my research.

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If it was bad i would say "triolet? more like toilet!" and it wouldnt be funny.


Buts its not, capital job.

Underscore:

I disagree. If you would have said "triolet? more like toilet!", it would have been VERY funny.

Thank you!

gigi

Corridor

The Zebra shits on your face

muchos gracias

Novicewriter

I would have to agree with MisterSpider...It made me smile It was quite entertaining as well...Just keep em' coming.

NW

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Corridor

Bravo

Gracias!