youngwriter

Inside I'm alone, inside I'm dying,
I feel so numb, I'm past the point of crying.
'tis a fact I've always known,
Every living thing on earth dies alone.

My future has already been decided,
I'll leave this life, with which I've abided.
I know what's coming, the seeds have been sown,
I, like everyone, will die alone.

I'm finally at rest, I've been disowned,
From the world which I previously condoned.
From the human nest I've flown,
It isn't so bad, to die alone.

flowersprite

That was great! There was a lot of feeling in your peice.

youngwriter

Thanks so much, all advice is appreciated.

youngwriter

Could I have any constructive advice please?