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Old 01-13-2005, 06:40 PM   #1
 
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"Beauty On The Corner"

Beauty on the Corner


Traffic control
Suspended animation
El Camino
"Ill Communication"

Pieces of thought
From my subtitled mind.
Fragmented sun
Through a broken window shines.

Twilight -
Just right.
Eyes flickering like gaslights.

White gessoed canvas
Dirty street-side grass
Confident conveyance
Pheromone - fragrance

"Closed ahead"
the sign said.
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Old 01-13-2005, 06:41 PM   #2
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Interesting.... Is this about an "escort" or woman of the night? Just curious is all. I liked it though.

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Old 01-13-2005, 06:44 PM   #3
 
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Nooo. Not at all. Just about observing the life taking place around me while I wait to cross the street.

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Old 01-13-2005, 06:45 PM   #4
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Ahhh....Told I wasn't good at understanding poetry I try though.

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Old 01-21-2005, 06:20 PM   #5
 
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It's totally the thought that counts, and i appreciate Your read!

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