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Old 12-30-2004, 08:54 PM   #1
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Prime number...
We are Prime
We are sublime
We hold every key
You and Me

We are the world
We are absurd
We are so magnificent
We are meant

We are primo
We are now
We are the number one
We become

We are the human race
We are the best
We won
We become

We do not fear
We do not hear
We dominate
We hate

We know
We show
We kill
We will

We try everyday
Deny destiny
We hesitate
We wait

Why?
DENY?

We are homo-sapiens all-powerful all knowing all dominate
We own it all we are the ultimate primate
Why do we wait?
We are the ultimate race

We won
We run
We become
We human

We write express interest
We could not be less
We are complete
We are the whole

We should not deny
We should not be shy
We should be proud
We should shout aloud

We are without bounds
We are so loud
We are profound
We are ….
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Old 12-30-2004, 10:27 PM   #2
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Penelope is an unknown quantity at this point
We are repetitive to a fault. This comes across as a sarcastic mantra.
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Old 01-01-2005, 10:21 PM   #3
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Dear Gordon,

I enjoyed this one immensely: I was especially attracted to it because this month my age will change to a "prime number" after I so enjoyed this year of being a multiple of 7!

A couple months ago I realized my new status - as a Prime - and it made me so oddly satisfied with myself... so it was quite delightful and syncronistic to find your piece here today... like an early birthday gift.

HOORAY!

With Passionate Gratitude,

Julie
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Old 01-02-2005, 12:16 AM   #4
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I like the poem! It is way so awesome!
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Old 01-02-2005, 05:35 AM   #5
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Something about this poem makes me want to hear or experience it performed!

You might want to whip out a handycam and recite it.
I think it would be a very telling experience.
I may be mistaken but listening to it in my head as I read it
gives me the impression that this poem is highly performable.

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Old 01-02-2005, 07:35 AM   #6
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Yeah I quite liked it! The short verses matched the poem!
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