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Old 12-17-2004, 11:57 AM   #16
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Good grief! I should pay more attention to what's going on here! I did like this but won't praise you to the rafters. I didn't like the extended breathless too long line with a period (of all things) 2/3rds of the way through it. Liked you using sashaying, great word which sounds like it moves. I've used it myself in reference to high heels. Oh and congratulations on being an attractive woman, I know that helps so much in regards to writing well .... not.
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Old 12-17-2004, 11:59 AM   #17
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Being attractive is subjective and it doesn't help with much - period.
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Old 12-17-2004, 12:02 PM   #18
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Old 12-17-2004, 12:04 PM   #19
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hahahah - touche!

Oh - and P: Thanks for the comment about the period - very good point.
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Old 12-19-2004, 03:22 PM   #20
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I love this poem...I'll leave it at that, I'd rather tell you in person.

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Old 12-19-2004, 03:25 PM   #21
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LOL! you ass!
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Old 11-04-2007, 06:57 AM   #22
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This is great. It conveys beautifuly how love really is - painful!
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Old 11-04-2007, 07:32 AM   #23
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What the fuck is wrong with you? This is three years old.

The poem is too genuine. May as well be in a fucking diary.
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