Cable Guy( explicit adult language and content!) - Writers Forum

gordon · 10-03-2004, 06:35 PM

Cable Guy.

I sit and watch the herd as it grazes in the Mall.
I love this part just watching them all.
Fat cows doped on Oprah.
A herd walking to the slaughter.

Its so easy selling cable TV.
Just smile and its all they can see.
When can you come round and hook me up?
I’ll hook you up then your fucked!
.
Slice N dice carve that bitch.
Ease the itch.
I aint ever going to quit.
This is me this is it.

Fat quivers as feces hit the floor.
Live in shit die in shit, you aint got no more.
Scrape some shit of the floor.
And swirl it around on the walls on the floor

Mystic messages on the wall.
Don’t mean fuck all.
Just fuckin with your head.
That bitch is dead.

I aint ever gonna stop.
I’ll keep carving till I drop.
This is it its what I do.
Cable guy can hook you up real soon.

Pawn · 10-03-2004, 07:21 PM

Do you know of Larkin, G? Author of the famous "They fuck you up, your mum and dad..." (This Be The Verse).

Some pretty weak rhymes in there, but overall a piece doing justice to its original feeling. Mocking, hateful and bitter. Nice.

gordon · 10-03-2004, 07:30 PM

I agree on the ryhmes Pawn
But the the bitterness and hate in this guys head
Just made me keep it simple its the way he veiws everything
Also the disregard for what he does is so childlike it had to be simple
On the larkin yes i do know of it
The mockery i,m glad you caught that he doesnt give a fuck simple as that no cares no remorse just enjoyment
Simple
G

Pawn · 10-03-2004, 08:41 PM

The enjoyment came through. I actually had fun reading it. I see what you're saying about the simple rhymes - fair enough. Good read.