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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 09-24-2004, 10:22 AM   #1
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4:30am
Eyes shoot open
Cannot sleep
Restless

Mind starts wondering
Thoughts of you
How you tasted
How you felt

Fingers start searching
Gliding over where you once were
Soft
And tender

Sweating
Doing what you did
By myself
Keep going

Breath is getting shorter
Fingers glide easily
More wet with each thrust
Feels so good

Faster
Canal clinching
One last cry
Done

I roll over in my empty bed
Body returning to normal
Soon asleep
6:30am
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Old 09-24-2004, 08:48 PM   #2
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Gorgeously pathetic. Simple, inelegant but far from ineffective.
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Old 09-24-2004, 10:04 PM   #3
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This one should have remained in your diary.

If you feel compelled to publish such literature, maybe you could warn us in the subject line that it is ADULT in nature.

Unfortuneately, I DID read it. Now Willy won't work. HMMMM......

I still kinda like your style...just warn me next time!
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