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09-07-2004, 04:57 PM
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Shameless
I've resorted to espionage.
I gather intelligence on what makes you happy,
Turn it into my game plan,
and pursue you with all that I am.
I've embraced piracy,
stealing moments of treasure sized dreams,
making you my prey,
and moving towards you,
like a vessel rides the wind.
I'm shamelessly your stalker,
sneaking peeks of you,
promoting desires which
I will not refrain from,
till you're captured and held as my prisoner.
I've relented to being your lover,
pleasing you with every last stretch of my body,
making you crave me with a ravenous appetite,
leaving you powerless and begging for more.
I am truly shameless.
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09-07-2004, 05:10 PM
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You can be more than shameless with me anytime.
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09-07-2004, 05:10 PM
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Great title. I like the poem too but it should be a little more shameless.  |
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09-07-2004, 05:10 PM
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aw reminds me of so many crushes... i like it.
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09-07-2004, 05:19 PM
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thank you
Rashadow, you crack me up, always! You are as shameless as I, aren't you????
Pen, I thought about being more shameless but then I'd have had to put this in erotica, hmmm.
D_Smalls, thank you, reminders are sometimes good. Welcome to the forums.
Nae
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Years of practice only to find, practice is for amateurs. Live life without a script...
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09-08-2004, 01:37 AM
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OOOOh!, you minx, you. lovely. Third stanza, 1st line, are you sure you didn't mean shamelessly. Sail on piratess and pillage, tally ho! huni
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09-08-2004, 10:17 AM
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thank you
Thank you Huni, I most definately meant shamelessly, thank you for catching it, I am so ashamed, NOT!!!! LOL
Nae 
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09-08-2004, 04:35 PM
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Very nice! I totally loved it!
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09-08-2004, 06:49 PM
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Nae go for it you know you want to
LOL
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09-08-2004, 08:36 PM
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Shameless? I suppose so, but intollerably nice in word games.
Good poem.
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09-09-2004, 12:23 PM
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Thank you
Thank you Hot Ice, I am glad you liked it.
Gordon, I know I want it, I am trying to get it, believe me!!!!
Farror, I finally won you over???? Yeah!!!!
Nae 
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09-09-2004, 03:18 PM
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Hello Nae, this poem does remind me also of past crushes. But I agree, you should be just a little bit more shameless, heh heh. It's been a long time since I've been here, and this poem really does get me into the swing of things again. Thank you for the read.
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09-10-2004, 09:50 AM
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AngelsKry welcome back! What a nice thing for you to say! I look forward to seeing (reading) more of you!
Nae
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09-10-2004, 04:40 PM
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Very cloak and dagger... I liked this one. Like a sexy James Bond movie... 'cept saucier... LOL
Great Read!
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09-11-2004, 03:59 PM
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games
Oooh I like that, like a James Bond movie, huh? Thank you!
Nae
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