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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
09-02-2004, 01:57 PM
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Blink
[an:04071140ba]Another one for the thread next door. Kind of a Haiku-Tanka-Haiku sandwich. For those who know about the thread I'm talking about, does this fit you think?[/an:04071140ba]
It is all a blur
I see that now, looking back
at what was my life
Life, a blinking eye
It appears Albert was right;
time is relative
I fear Friedrich was right, too;
eternal recurrence.....blink
Blink again, again
why do they torture me?
Those goddamn Germans
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09-05-2004, 10:54 AM
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eleutheromaniac
Love this piece. It gave me one hell of a laugh.
Those germans have given me many migraines over the years.
I like the form and style of this piece it fits the poet in the variations that were made. Excellent work
warmest regards,
bob (the sith)
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09-05-2004, 08:19 PM
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Well done Jason...this one really hits home. From my vantage point...it is less than a blink! 
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09-05-2004, 08:29 PM
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Thanks for the feedback Bea and Bob (the Sith makes an all too rare appearance on this side  ). I'll be posting this in the thread when my numbers up. |
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09-06-2004, 05:08 AM
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Great el-maniac, funny and smart, as you often are. huni.
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09-07-2004, 04:34 AM
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Thanks for the compliment Huni. Glad you liked it.
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09-07-2004, 09:04 AM
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Which thread next door?
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09-07-2004, 05:23 PM
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Sorry, I should have been more specific; the if thread. I think this fits in loosely with the regret theme, but I'm not sure. What do you think?
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