HerHero

Remembered (C)2004, Jeremiah

I forget to remember
but remember to forget
I live inside your heart
only sometimes I will regret

I guess I could say
That your kiss broke my heart
But it's ok
Kiss me for the last time

I want to see your face
The rich beauty beheld in your eyes
But I can't see you
Through this glowing sea

Radioactive you tear apart my soul
Knocking everything out of order
One day my waves will crash on you
One day you may understand why I am this way

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"..so here's a song about the best day i ever had..."
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release: http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=...le_heart_break
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mom. dad. i'm....emo **gasp**

Aubrey

Hi Jeremiah!

A very complicated read. I like how the first stanza started, rhyming and flowing, but then it rather stumbled into free verse. Just a question: Did you intend it to be that way?

All around, it's a good poem. You did a great job writing it up!

--Aubrey

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"This is the beginning of a new day. You have been given this day to use as you will. You can waste it or use it for good. What you do today is important because you are exchanging a day of your life for it."

acetronic

in hell

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Call me Asian, which makes me happy.

HerHero

yeah...I forgot to remember

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"..so here's a song about the best day i ever had..."
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artsy: http://sorryaboutyourheart.cjb.net
release: http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=...le_heart_break
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mom. dad. i'm....emo **gasp**