Hate - Writers Forum

Ataryu · 08-06-2004, 02:22 PM

Started out as lyrics to a song, ended as a poem.

I think I wrote this last year, or in july of thsi year:

Hate is that of what is inside you
Hate is what you bleed when you cant feel the pain
Hate is the pain when you can't bleed
And when you cant feel the soul of the lonely heart

Hating a hated soul is what hate is all about
Hate waits in the dark shadows of the forgotten alley
Hate is why you try so hard
And hate is why you fail

Hate makes it all go round
And then makes all fall
Hate brings life till dusk then dawn
Hate takes life when all goes wrong

**Penelope** · 08-06-2004, 02:43 PM

ended as a peom huh?

Ataryu · 08-06-2004, 03:33 PM

??Umm...yes??

nae411 · 08-06-2004, 03:36 PM

Pen was referring to Peom, unstead of Poem (typo) she is a funny girl.
Welcome to the forums, look forward to reading more.

Nae

**Penelope** · 08-06-2004, 03:40 PM

Well .. I suppose I could have said that I 'hate' it.

Ataryu · 08-06-2004, 03:46 PM

Arg, sometimes I can be a dope

Oh well, I didn't really like it either, I wasn't going to post it, but I did write it so I figured I would

I wrote this a while back......

**Penelope** · 08-06-2004, 03:47 PM

Don't worry about it. It just caught my eye is all. No big deal.