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Old 07-01-2004, 05:18 PM   #1
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Maybe I should have posted this in Critique and Advice, but all I really want to know is, does it seem like a complete poem?

Anxious
Learning
Falling
You drive me crazy
Hoping
Eager
Wishing
I told you how I felt
Waiting
Wondering
Nervous
You didn’t return
Depressed
Lonely
Embarrassed
Trying to move on
Searching
Discouraged
Hurting
I meet someone new
Anxious
Learning
Falling

thanks in advance. ttyl.
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Old 07-01-2004, 05:58 PM   #2
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you know what? it's a minimalist piece but I liked it. The cycle completes and restarts. Felt complete to me!
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Old 07-05-2004, 07:24 PM   #3
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A full circle poem. Complete and satisfying in every way


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Old 07-06-2004, 12:40 PM   #4
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Thank you very much to you both!
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This was great. Is it a particular style? bob said 'circle poem', which is a good description. I am going to try one myself after your success. regards huni.
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