mom11159

Beauty

Beauty is what we see out there,
Beauty is what we find everywhere.
The things oh so simple, we reach out and touch,
The Beauty around u,we love it so much.

When you take a deep breath peace fills you heart.
It makes you feel like a fresh start.
When you see the squirrels running in the trees
Finding their way through the warm summer breeze.

When you hear the birds chirping their beautiful song,
You can sit there and listen, all day long.
When you walk around in the beauty you see.
Wrapped up in a hold of tranquility you'll be.

The sight of this beauty is so grand,
When you see wonderful trees how they stand.
Watching the animals who live in this place,
How peaceful and happy,it shows on their face.

This place so wonderful, this place so devine,
Beauty around us is there all the time.
Open your eyes and heart to whats here,
In this glorious place you'll always be near,
Near to whats beautiful, that God gave to us
Like paradise in heaven ,on earth its a must!!!!

written by:
Catherine Sawyer

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Catherine Sawyer

flier58

Your rythm disappeared in this one. Looking through the stanzas if you count the syllables you'll see what I mean.
8,9,11,11 - 1st stanza
10,8,11,10 - 2nd stanza
12,10,11,12 - 3rd stanza
9,10,11,11 - 4th stanza
11,10,9,10,11,12 - 5th stanza
Apart from that I though it was really good. Paints the picture well.

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Gillian