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Old 05-03-2004, 01:34 AM   #1
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Ode To My Mistress
I'm just a simple man
Living life and seeking God
Not given to fancy prose
Some may even think me odd
I go about my daily tasks
Not seeking fame or riches
Just happy to go to work each day
Paving roads and digging ditches
But when the day is over
And my working day is done
I race back home to greet my love
My life has just begun
I wrap my sturdy hands
Around this vessel I adore
Impatient to consume her
Then I'll be back for more
I love my faithful mistress
(You onephile's needn't sneer)
I know that I'm in Heaven
Drinking my ice-cold glass of beer
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Old 05-03-2004, 05:11 AM   #2
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I liked this poem Bea. It seems a bit rushed
at the end. Hmmmm Hey! what the heck. You're
76 years old. I know, I'll never reach that age
Congrats It's cool.. excellent..

Respect....Mouse..
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You got that right Mouse...that ole hourglass keeps flowing! Thanks for the kind words.
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You're cool Bea, I like your attitude..

Respect and best wishes...Mouse..
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