Mouse

The wildest mare I ever rode,
I called her, hi ya sung lung foe,
After a take away down the road,
Pork fried rice, mmmm chicken chowmein,
She bucked me off a couple of times,
I got back on and made her fly,
She was so fast this horse of mine,
She flew from first to over drive,

She dragged me through the bush one day,
Whoa horsie, whoa horsie,
Clap, clap, clap, hey hey hey,
Whoa horsie whoa whoa,
She wouldn't stop, just kept on going,
Whoa horsie, whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,
I quickly got back on and rode,
until she tired out,

We grew to be, best of friends,
Sung lung foe and me,
Through rivers,valleys,over hills,
We'd ride or day, then stop for tea,

Then one day, sung lung foe,
Died from natural cause's,
So, I sold her to the take away bar,
Chin wah, sung dun goy, Hi yaaaaaa,
I'll always remember, my best friend,
As I eat my chicken chowmein,

She dragged me through the bush one day,
Whoa horsie, whoa horsie,
Clap, clap, clap, hey hey hey,
Whoa horsie whoa whoa,
She wouldn't stop, just kept on going,
Whoa horsie, whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,
I managed to get back on and ride,
until she tired out,

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scryer

Yup! reads like a poem!
I am still giggling...."So, I sold her to the take away bar,
Chin wah, sung dun goy, Hi yaaaaaa, "

-Lisa

Mouse

Thanks Lisa, this is my first ever poem.
I'm glad you liked it..

Best wishes...Mouse..

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Kat

A little sick but as I read it I see horsemeat. The line I'll always remember my best friend as I est my chicken chowmein, a little messed up. Is it really chicken? Umm I think it's pobably just me though. But it was funny nontheless.

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Mouse

oops.... Thankyou..

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