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Old 10-11-2003, 11:38 AM   #1
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Family

Family

Family is why I am alive,
Without family I am alone,
Without family, without home,
A person cannot be happy.

When they argue it hurts me,
Even if I don't like them,
They are still family,
I can't turn away.

Family is stronger than differences,
Carried by blood and by name,
It cannot be denied although,
People can always try.

Mother and father,
Brother and sister,
Aunt and uncle,
Nephew and Neice,
Grandmother and grandfather.

It hurts when they argue,
It feels heavy when we part,
Whatever my dislike or their faults,
Whatever harsh words have passed,
They will always be my family.
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Old 10-11-2003, 11:53 AM   #2
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So true... I have this almost everyday. I love all the people in my family, but it is so hard to live with them everyday. It gets annoying sometimes. To the point where I just want to scream. That is why I have writing and music, they are my escapes. Seems that writing may be one for you too!

As for the poem, I thought it was well I am not sure. Maybe it had too many words... It just didn't seem to flow right for me.
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