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09-29-2003, 05:50 PM
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Freaky feet
Freaky Feet
Freaky feet with veins on the side
Make us all realize
Our lower halves are not designed
For visual pleasure
No not ever
Big toe blues with ugly nails
Small toes also make us pale
We have ugly toes
Everyone knows
Splayed feet big feet small feet too
The problem is what to do?
Some feet smell
We know too well
It’s a nightmare scenario
A footing hell
What can we do to make it right?
Keep them inside
That’s all right
Out of view and kept inside
Until we decide
To let them loose what the hell
This is my foot hear it smell
Just that sort of night nothing heavy having a laugh tonite
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09-30-2003, 05:06 PM
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You could be right as an obvious informed poetry critic
What can i say if i knew who you were it would help?
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09-30-2003, 05:32 PM
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Nice Gordon... *smiles* you are a funny one...
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10-07-2003, 02:05 AM
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i wrote a 'feet' orintated poem, but yours is better... although you didn't mention hairy toes which leaves me to be disappointed...
nah, not really
great one!
*has very pretty feet which don't smell!*
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10-07-2003, 11:56 AM
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I am foot-phobic. Won't even let my hubby's near me. I wholeheartedly agree-- "Keep them inside".
Good poem ((shudders)).
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10-07-2003, 01:22 PM
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cute poem Gordon, personally I don't mind feet as long as they are well tended to. 
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10-07-2003, 03:01 PM
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I love feet! I adore those delightful hairs on them too! What is the matter with people? I could spend hours rubbing someone's feet. (no I don't have a foot fetish!) They are not freaky at all. They do a simply splendiferous job of holding a person upright. Feet suffer heaps of abuse of being squished into shoes which never fit just right. Imagine all of those miles they take us without complaining much. You malign the noble foot Gordon. For shame! |
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10-07-2003, 03:04 PM
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So, so true Pen! I never really thought of it that way, but maybe more people should. I never thought feet were "freaky"/ ugly, but I never really thought of them as beautiful or my "best friends" so to speak...
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10-08-2003, 01:57 AM
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hoorah for feet!!!
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