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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 09-28-2003, 11:03 PM   #1
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Old 09-28-2003, 11:23 PM   #2
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Wow! I really like this poem. I felt like it was elegent and thoughful. Very good imagery as well. And there's even a good flow despite your "non-rhyming". Very cool.

btw- I'm Amanda (Darkshine Raven over at lit.org), and I'm eighteen. Welcome! *waves*
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Old 09-29-2003, 04:09 PM   #3
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I like this a lot well done
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Old 09-29-2003, 04:24 PM   #4
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The first verse struck me as prosaic at first, but I realized how well it went with the rest of the poem when I finished reading it. It was the second verse that really pulled me in and I was just bespelled all the way through. Excellent work.
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