KiaKilla4206

A guilty conscious never survives
playing in your mind like a record
over and over
terrible voices sing sinister melodies
the song never ends
tears emerge from your eyes
and you hold your ears tight
wont it go away?
insanety spills all over
against your hearts will
images and voices haunt
every single thought you make
the singing wont shut up
the memories wont stop coming
over and over again
Louder and louder
the memories wont stop screaming!
a guilty conscious never survives.

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"You don't know peace until you have suffering"-Mushroomhead

Darkshine

Ohh...I like this. Good imagery, I felt really caught up in what you were trying to say. Very nice statement. The flow was also excellent.

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"The trouble with poets is they talk too much."
-Paul Mulvey

KiaKilla4206

Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You don't see any errors? I know I spelled insanity wrong, but please if you have ANY problems with it tell me. I won't get angry.

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"You don't know peace until you have suffering"-Mushroomhead

Darkshine

Perhpas try and work on the punctuation to guide the reader, you know tell them were to pause and such. Uhhh..."against your hearts will" should be "against your heart's will".

However, I'm poor with catching grammer and spelling errors when it comes to poetry. I tend to get too caught up in it to notice.

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"The trouble with poets is they talk too much."
-Paul Mulvey