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No matter how hard I push I get nowhere.
Push. Push. Push.
Nothing.
I can feel the blood swelling now.
Building up.
This is the worst thing that has ever happened.
Pain.
I'm losing consciousness.
I must keep on pushing.
The end is in sight.
I can feel it coming now.
Onwards into the abyss.
I'm getting nowhere.
Here it comes.
Relief.
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My king! my Jove! I speak to thee, my heart!
This is so painful to read and yet when i do i feel as though i'm experiencing every word you write.
A masterpiece that everyone can relate too, it holds both inspiration and
emotion, and really speaks from the heart. well done!