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Old 09-25-2003, 07:18 PM   #1
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Music

Imagine you're a ship,
Upon a journey to tomorrow.
Songs are the golden stars,
Which guide you.
Imagine you're a sparrow,
In a gentle westward wind.
Music is the change of season,
Which guides you.
Imagine you're a traveler,
Who has lost his way.
Music becomes a beacon,
Which guides you.
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Old 09-26-2003, 02:28 AM   #2
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which guides you. its too short and lacks rhythm (those words). i shall be your guide, maybe?
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Old 09-26-2003, 02:57 PM   #3
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Music for me is many things. It lives within my heart and soul. It brings me pleasure and helps achieve my goals. Opinions, opinions... I like the poem, rather good I would say. Music is a beacon for me also. It helps guide my soul and has a lot of meaning behind it.
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