godisthyname

Deena.
Is there anybody cleaner?
In the state of Caroleena.
If there is I've never seen her.

Beatrice Boyle

I didn't think you were old enough to remember Danny Kaye...he wrote it first about his daughter!

Deena,
Is there anyone feener
In the state of Caroleena
If there is, then show her to me!

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SD

I guess plagiarism is a an art in itself. And we are all plagiarists, aren't we? Using words already used. I quote Plath in my poems, the Bard, too. It's a kind of homage, of course, I don't do it to deceive, but if I do use her line or his, I put it there in plain sight, in quotes or whathaveyou.

Sorry, g, I was having a real shitty week. Took it out on you. This place is perfect for the like of us though. Let's try to get by, even if that poll says we all have a bad tempers. I guess it is part of being a creative person, you see demons where there are none.

I am sorry. Please, write on.

SD

godisthyname

excuse me?

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SD

Bump

Fantasia

As Jesus is my witness, godisthyname... I was gonna rave about this poem, but then Beatrice said...

::sighs::

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"God says he can get me out of this mess, but he's pretty sure you're f%#ked." --Stephen, from "Braveheart"

godisthyname

So close.

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My king! my Jove! I speak to thee, my heart!

Fantasia

For what it's worth, your version is better than the original one...

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"God says he can get me out of this mess, but he's pretty sure you're f%#ked." --Stephen, from "Braveheart"

godisthyname

that's worth a lot

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My king! my Jove! I speak to thee, my heart!