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Old 09-21-2003, 09:08 PM   #1
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Blind Times (Cinquain)

Black Out...
Running through night
Demons tattered and ripped
Hell tears all apart in the dark
Blue Sun...
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Old 09-24-2003, 09:04 AM   #2
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Why did you write Blue Sun? If you had written Blue Moon as in 'once in a blue moon' it would have given the impression that a 'black out' is not a common occurance.
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Old 09-24-2003, 02:29 PM   #3
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I was tempted to write Blue Moon, but for some reason I just had to put Blue Sun... I guess I thought of it as the same thing as "Blue Moon." Except, there are motion pictures that show the sun in the desert where it looks quite Blue.
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Really I was thinking the same as you Pen. *smiles*
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Old 09-24-2003, 03:03 PM   #5
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A blue moon - when there is a full moon twice in one month.
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