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Old 09-09-2003, 02:21 PM   #1
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Shades of Autumn
SHADES OF AUTUMN

My silent steps trespass
the soft Autumn meadow.


Nimbus clouds lean low
As my tears blend with the rain
washing the earth.

Does she hear the Ave I breathe?
Will my soft words warm her?

Sleep in peace my love.
Soon the door will open
And by your side
I will slumber forever.
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Old 09-09-2003, 02:52 PM   #2
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I see that I have posted a poem in the wrong forum. Sorry, Maggie
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Old 09-09-2003, 05:48 PM   #3
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Pretty good one, though.
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I agree. Well done!
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Old 09-10-2003, 08:16 AM   #5
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Thank you maitaman and Steven. Maggie
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Old 09-11-2003, 11:12 PM   #6
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I liked it too...smooth and sweet! I dropped in to say hello.

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Thank you Scryer, glad you liked it. Maggie
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Old 09-12-2003, 12:53 PM   #8
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Excellent
Imagery!
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Old 09-13-2003, 01:02 PM   #9
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Thank you imagery. Maggie
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Old 09-15-2003, 06:31 PM   #10
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I took the liberty of relocating it to poetry. Great poem, btw!
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Old 09-21-2003, 09:39 AM   #11
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Thank you Chrispin. Sorry not to have replied earlier but I was away having to spend time inportugal and putting up with all that sunshine that I am not used to. Please explain btw
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