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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
09-08-2003, 10:57 AM
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hollyoake & Bea
Snow White disguise.
Innocent eyes.
Simple and pure.
Looks so demure.
She begs the question.
Submits a suggestion.
She's a clever lass
with lots of class.
Her words, I was gleaning
for some subtler meaning.
I assume she's sincere
and reply loud and clear.
She's added her 'dislike'.
One more hole in the dike.
Now Bea's joined the troop
to land him in the soup.
With white tennis shoes
not a sight to amuse.
She may look like a nun
but she'll have him on the run.
Soon the dam will burst
and my brother will be cursed.
thanks!
Pen
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09-08-2003, 09:19 PM
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I like this very much, but is it for everyone or just those two? Just a thought...
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09-08-2003, 09:32 PM
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If you've read hollyoak's poem Penelope and the responses then you would understand. And yes, I'm always recruiting in the army of bad wishes for my brother.
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09-08-2003, 09:43 PM
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Understand!
Oh, I understand now! Should have read more on her poem Penelope before. I was going to, but I had to leave. Totally understand now though. Ya know I would help too. LOL! 
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09-08-2003, 09:46 PM
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okay .. you're recruited too!  |
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09-08-2003, 09:48 PM
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Yay!
This is going to be so much fun 
Hope my mom and dad don't mind me leaving for a little while!
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09-25-2003, 02:08 AM
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hey i have only just seen this!
cool piece Pen, i love it, has grandma seen it yet?
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09-25-2003, 02:26 AM
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Yes, Hollyoke, I've seen it. Check PEN'S POSSE on page 3 of poetry. We're still recruiting, so grab your musket and join us! 
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09-25-2003, 02:34 AM
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righto
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