Tania

Cutting out the Extraneous
Cutting away the Extraneous
Cutting to the bone
Cutting along the fine line
Cutting out on my own
Cutting out your heart for mine
Cutting to the chase
Cutting my own soul so fine
Cutting my own space
Trying to minimise the obvious
Trying to simplify my life
Cutting the crap of psychodrama
Keeping and cutting out strife
To keep to a minimal experience
Keeping it so refined
Cutting my life into pieces
Just to buy myself some time
Tania Walsh

Farror

Wow, what a lively poem! I have not seen many poems with a rythm as fast as this one (ha! I nearly wrote "with a rythm as fat as this one") I liked the way you used the same word over and over but in different wasy and it made it seem much less repeditive/

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