Anonymous

Hearts can crack
Under the pressure
Of emotion
Hurt, Anger and Less
Attractive Emotions
Can Surface
Leaving the Vunerability
Bare
And Bleeding
Tears of Obscurity
Bruises on Egos
Giving birth to Issues
Of Vague and Sad
Paternity
Cracked from Battles
Left Forgotten
Buried deep within
Festering and Rotten
Solidified in Indifference
As emotion is Parched
And Purged
And Forgotten
Tania

Farror

Oooohh, now that ones dark. I like it, My only problem with it is that it near the begining, you make your lines rather jagged, which does not seem to work with this poem, although I did note that you stopped doing that about halfway through. Well, good job and write more like it!

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