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Old 06-27-2003, 12:51 AM   #1
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Sunset
The sun sets in vain,
Its colorful scheme
The end of a long day,
Beginning of a quiet night

Slowly the sun sinks
Declaring its leave
Come quickly, leaves quickly
But seems to last a lifetime

Nothing beautiful lasts
Always seems to face away
Like the setting sun
Sinks behind the clouds
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Old 06-27-2003, 05:57 AM   #2
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I like watching sunsets too. Inspirational...
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Old 06-27-2003, 05:42 PM   #3
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This poem has a nice dreamy feel to it. I like the visuals. Good job


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Something about this piece reminds me of a short Robert Frost poem I read in high school. Nice image you have here.
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Old 06-28-2003, 04:45 PM   #5
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I agree ! Nice.
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Old 06-28-2003, 10:22 PM   #6
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hey
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