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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 06-26-2003, 03:40 AM   #1
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Dreaming of You

I’ve lost myself in a sea of dreams
My feet no longer touch the ground
My head reels until I can't think anymore

I’m followed by my thoughts wherever I go
My sky is painted with pictures of your face
My words only speak of one name

I’ll lose myself wondering where you are
My nights are filled with thoughts of you
My days are endless with my dreams

I’d wake myself up from this dream
But what happens when I do?
Is it over or has it all came true?
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Old 06-26-2003, 07:59 AM   #2
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my, if i haven't had those feelings. a very nice and well written piece.
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Old 06-27-2003, 12:49 AM   #3
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thanks, great feelings to feel, eh?
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