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Old 06-21-2003, 05:57 PM   #1
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2poems(lyrics?)

REDEMPTION

No cry for help
no such foolish things
death, just a step away
why should i hold out my hand
to you or any other
will there be flowers on my grave
tears on my flowerbed
or just a casket, open for all to see
my torn chest, my missing heart
will it matter, to you or anyone
that im gone
i only hunger for release
redemption



Raindrops
Your hair was wet
so was your face
it rained outside
i thought you looked beautifull
i thought i loved you
i spoke not; i only
wiped the raindrops from your eyes
raindrops fell against the window pane
i could not see your sorrow, your pain
you stayed only for a while
on the door, you stood only for a while
and then you turned and left
no goodbye
when you truly left, left this world
you left a piece of paper for me to find
torn,wet and bloody
im sorry.i love you
those werent raindrops on your eyes
these are not raindrops on my eyes
on the wall with my blood i scrible
i love you too
fitting end for a hellish life



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Old 06-25-2003, 03:32 PM   #2
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that bad eh?
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Old 06-27-2003, 01:37 AM   #3
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hey,
Redemption you could feel the anger and Raindrops was sad :'-(
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