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Old 06-08-2003, 10:56 PM   #1
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Against Me

this one's for rcallaci, who wanted more of my anger. sorry to say its not in the voice u hoped for but it is angry. i wrote it after listening to a favorite punk song. the flow kinda follows the pace of the song. thats why the lines seem so short and fast.

Against Me

Stupid fuckin' people
Why is it they can't see
Just what they do to me
Why is it that they lash out
Against all I believe
I don't desire to grow old
Not without being free
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Old 06-22-2003, 07:28 PM   #2
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Hi free mind, that should be lyrics instead don't you think. A good punk song.

Wanna go moshing?

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Old 06-23-2003, 01:16 AM   #3
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moshing sounds good to me, u can come to the van's warped tour with me and my crew. its a great show, lotsa moshing too.
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Old 06-23-2003, 09:08 AM   #4
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Ha, free mind I'll leave the moshing and bruises that go along with it to my daughters.
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Old 06-23-2003, 12:21 PM   #5
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h daughters! how old are they? lol
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Old 06-23-2003, 01:14 PM   #6
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Actually my oldest is your age, 17 you said right? I am the proud mother of three very unusual girls. Mind you I'm not that normal, so I guess some of it rubs off on them. Iv'e got a ball player, a boxer, and one Goth. I am always entertained at home.

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Old 06-24-2003, 02:12 AM   #7
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thats cool. i like the unusual ones. they are more interesting than all the rest. u should hook me up hahaha.
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