aubie84

She coaxes my touch
On her warm naked skin.
She teases, defiant,
Not so much as a grin.


With confident strokes
I begin to caress her,
Marking her skin
With my inky tattoos.
She moves not a muscle
As my fingers address her.
She has no hang-ups,
No doubts, no taboos.


If she fails to please
I shall quietly
Dismiss her,
And seek solace anew
With her naked
Twin sister.

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rcallaci

A fun and witty piece. You gave me a smile. Good use of rhyme and a wicked ending. How many times have I crumbled that blank page.

Warm Regards,
Bob

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Bartleby

Great job on portraying the struggles of writing in a unusual and witty manner. And what a subversive ending. I loved it.

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