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    Desired By Others

    I’ve never been contempt
    Between the conflicts
    That carrion tangled words
    From a juries chapping lips

    Palm readers were just the same
    I can tell you’re worries are heavy hands
    While your futures just the same

    I’ve never known a well-off clash
    For the want of saving calloused hands

    Seams skew…the unsown crooks
    As words etched brittle into yours

    Though in the drudges smooth glossed
    On gentle language burrowed in my chest

    The words etched brittle into yours
    Seams skew…the unsown crooks
    Last edited by shedpog329; 01-21-2012 at 05:20 AM.

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    i think the last two stanzas need work

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