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    Content

    I own
    one hundred items.
    My abode consists of three rooms,
    and I am content.

    Retrace your steps
    to when joy was colossal -
    when milk was your meal
    and the growing ground was uncharted.

    Prized possessions were chewed blankets,
    ragged bears
    and the backs of dogs.

    Abandon your silvered mechanics,
    wrench yourself to reality and realize
    your own addictions.

    That delectable espresso,
    the shampoo that signifies sexuality -
    you cannot even discern
    what you truly need.

    Retreat to a time when a bag
    held all you desired,
    when one was thankful for the shelter
    an evergreen branch provided.

    Never wonder at night
    if a silent stranger prowls through your retreat -
    the first roofs held but a single room,
    and we were content.
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    This is beautiful. The words are simple but they convey a lot.
    Retrace your steps
    to when joy was colossal -
    when milk was your meal
    and the growing ground was uncharted.
    You have no idea how these lines affected me, I felt a sense of serenity enveloping me while I read this.

    the first roofs held but a single room,
    and we were content.
    What would people give for that peace in today's world?

    I find myself looking for that that contentment in others but people seldom have it. I'm working on that but I do feel I have more inner peace now than before.

    Thanks for sharing, I needed this.
    “The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen

    "Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke


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    If you invest in possessions, you give your soul away for no return. Your xBox cannot love you back.

    I really liked the ideas in this.
    There's nothing like a simile.

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    A very heartfelt message in this, that we could all reflect on Damien, and your choice of words are perfect. Very nice.

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